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What is?

10/5/13 by Jiovanni

What is war without greed?
What is want without need?
What is give without take?
What sorrow without break?
What is the soul without life?
what is betrayal without the knife?
What is right without wrong?
What is verse without song?
What is dark without light?
What is strength without fight?
What is love without hate?
too many questions... now it's to late.

The goal is not to always wonder why,
the goal is to make your worth, not just to die.
Not to let your questions, unanswered, pass you by.
Do not listen to the lie,
for nothing, you do not have to die.

I don't really know what this is, it just kind of fell out as I was rhyming each verse.


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CyberdevilCyberdevil

10/8/13

A cause to fight for.
Gluttony.
Generosity.
Desperation.
Lost.
Painful.
Undefinable.
Rap.
Useless.
Limitless.

Oh wait... those were rhetorical questions? :P Didn't all make sense, but I liked this poem.

10/8/13 Jiovanni responds:

Thanks! Yeah it was pretty much some nonsense rambling thoughts that popped into my head.


DoomroarDoomroar

10/5/13

Revenge, survival, etc.
consumerism, capitalism.
STDs...
a deep melancholy.
a ghost!
a punch in da face!
an idealism!
laziness...
actually is the same, dark is something without light...
domination!
infatuation limiting into fanaticism and obsession!
well it depends on your time zone.

but how?
how... much?
yeah we should at least charge them a toll!
bu smelling is ok i hope...
you can die for an by something, like by the aforementioned STDs...

i don't know what this is either but is susceptible to some funny answers!

10/5/13 Jiovanni responds:

LOL! that is hilarious!!!